One cold, darkened night, there lived a man who didn't know the history of the neigborhood. That is about to change, There has been a rumor going arounf the neighboorhood that there has been a mysterious figure terrorizing people's home since the early 19oo's. But the man wasn't scared but what he may enounter may change his mind. He was going to bed when he hears
(thump, thump, thump and goes back down thump, thump thum) at first he was alarmed and grabbed a baseball bat. He grabs a flashlight and heads down the stairs to the basement door and opens it and no one was there. So he just went back up the stairs to bed but he hears the strange noise again.
(thump, thump, thump and down again thump, thump, thump)
And again he is alarmed but this time he opens the door and goes down the stairs and again no one was there. He decided to go into the living room and sleep so when the noise comes back he can attack whoever is making that noise, he grabs a baseball bat incase something happens. And again the noise comes again
(thump thump thump)
But htis time he was awwake in time and he grabs the baseball bat and a flashlight and opens the door. He sees a mysterious figure, it is very pale white color and it seems to be wearing a tux. He quickly calls the police and then they come and the ghost is gone.
He goes outside and waits but when he turns around the house is a huge mess! The man goes uncioncious and eventually moves to another house, but to this day that house is a famous ghost hunting site and people everywhere come to see tours of the house at night when the ghost comes. To this day they have no idea who is the ghost but the ghost is very active and it is staying there for centuries to come.
Friday, June 4, 2010
Tuesday, June 1, 2010
World Trade Center
The picture--------------------->
This is a model of the world trade center out of legos, my group and I are making it for a project so hopefully it will turn out. I promise you that I will get a picture of the finished product.
This is a model of the world trade center out of legos, my group and I are making it for a project so hopefully it will turn out. I promise you that I will get a picture of the finished product.
Dark and Scary Night
During a spooky night, Dan Drograth decided to take a walk into the woods by his house. Suddenly he hears a crack in a peice of wood as if he is being followed, he turns around and no one is there. He then walks again and then hears another crack in a peice of wood but this time the nose was louder. He turns around and again no one was there.
He then hears a voice in the distance "Dan-come to me!"
Somehow he is in a trance, he is forced to walk to the voice and he sees the most ugliest creature in the word. It is a oozy, green, oh it so gross i cant start to make it out, it gives me chills. Fortunelty he has a firecracker in his backpack and fires it up. It starts to make fireworks in the ground and the creature is forced to jump into the trees, Dan starts run away as fast as he can, but it is no use the creature has attacked him, but good thing he has martial-art skills and takes the creature out, he tries to take off the headpeice of the hideous monster and he does! The person tells him that he has been haunting the island for about thirty years because he hates the island and he doesnt want anyone to step foot on it so athorities take him away to jail and now that island is a national landmark for that guys famous actions.
He then hears a voice in the distance "Dan-come to me!"
Somehow he is in a trance, he is forced to walk to the voice and he sees the most ugliest creature in the word. It is a oozy, green, oh it so gross i cant start to make it out, it gives me chills. Fortunelty he has a firecracker in his backpack and fires it up. It starts to make fireworks in the ground and the creature is forced to jump into the trees, Dan starts run away as fast as he can, but it is no use the creature has attacked him, but good thing he has martial-art skills and takes the creature out, he tries to take off the headpeice of the hideous monster and he does! The person tells him that he has been haunting the island for about thirty years because he hates the island and he doesnt want anyone to step foot on it so athorities take him away to jail and now that island is a national landmark for that guys famous actions.
Thursday, May 27, 2010
Fishing up north
I am walking to the boat-feeling anxious to get some fish. I get in the boat, soon we are cruising to our fishing spot, No luck for about a half an hour, But then on my last cast is the lucky one. I cast out, I feel something biting my line, I jerk it, I real in real fast, I feel that im going to lose my rail because its so heavy! But I pull as hard as I can, suddenly my sister casts out and her fish is under the boat! But I real my fish in! When it comes out of the water i am in sudden shock! It looks like it is a small northern! Its heavy, I am so excited that I cannot talk! Soon, I put the fish back in and the fishing trip is over. I race up to our cabin to tell everyone that I caught a big fish. At dinner my dad made a hockey puck and I had the best day ever in one whole day
Tuesday, May 4, 2010
Mini Lockdown
I am at school, I hear sirens in the midst of emotions. I see police cars coming into the school parking lot. Next thing I hear is that it is lockdown mode, so I rush to the side and try to keep quiet, I hear footsteps at our door, next thing I know the doorknob starts to move, luckily its locked. I see a bullet come through the wood and I see the door opening! I hear footsteps coming up the main hallway I see cops! They grab the burgular and they take him away! I was scared for nothing!
Friday, April 30, 2010
Battle Of Chatoonoga
It was November twenty-third and I wake up to hear a bang in the distance. I rush downstairs to see what is happening and I see soldiers lined up, what could be happening? The next thing I know I am grabbed from behind and then rushed outside the house. My body is rushed, next thing I know I am far away and then I realize that I am part of the war and I am also in the woods. Everyone is exhausted so we go to sleep, I wait until my dad is sleeping and I sneak out of our tent to go to our house and grab as many weapons as I can.
I rush past the campsite and it takes me about fifteen minutes to get back to the house but I got there. The house is messed up but I go to the spare room and see most of the weapons are unharmed! I grab as many as I can and by the time I am back at the campsite the sun is starting to come up so I decided to make breakfast. The first one to wake up is my dad and he is proud of me because I brought weapons and he starts to eat breakfast. The next thing I hear is cannons coming right toward us. Quickly my father and I wake everyone up and grab as many things as we can and head out to the train station. We see another soldier but this type of soldier is on our side!
We warn the soldier that there is a enemies coming and he decides to come with us, because if he didn’t come with us he would be defensless. We hear more cannons so we quickly go into the train and lock everything and wait. We decide to stay in the train until the next day. Today we fight for what we believe in. Even though we were to scared to fight in the beginning it is time to face the enemy and stop this war once and for all. I turn on my portable radio and hear that President Licholn knows that Chattoonoga is a very important city for imports and exports so he is sending reinforcement ASAP.
Suddenly we hear a crack and then all these supplies come into the train and we eat some food and we are not starving anymore. We decide to start the coal up again and go to the next city for about an hour. We deliever supplies to whoever needs them, we see tons of families homeless I was shocked. I quickly give families what they need when we run out of supplies we head back to Chattonooga to see what is happening now. We are informed that the war is over and the Union won! Which means our side won!
I rush past the campsite and it takes me about fifteen minutes to get back to the house but I got there. The house is messed up but I go to the spare room and see most of the weapons are unharmed! I grab as many as I can and by the time I am back at the campsite the sun is starting to come up so I decided to make breakfast. The first one to wake up is my dad and he is proud of me because I brought weapons and he starts to eat breakfast. The next thing I hear is cannons coming right toward us. Quickly my father and I wake everyone up and grab as many things as we can and head out to the train station. We see another soldier but this type of soldier is on our side!
We warn the soldier that there is a enemies coming and he decides to come with us, because if he didn’t come with us he would be defensless. We hear more cannons so we quickly go into the train and lock everything and wait. We decide to stay in the train until the next day. Today we fight for what we believe in. Even though we were to scared to fight in the beginning it is time to face the enemy and stop this war once and for all. I turn on my portable radio and hear that President Licholn knows that Chattoonoga is a very important city for imports and exports so he is sending reinforcement ASAP.
Suddenly we hear a crack and then all these supplies come into the train and we eat some food and we are not starving anymore. We decide to start the coal up again and go to the next city for about an hour. We deliever supplies to whoever needs them, we see tons of families homeless I was shocked. I quickly give families what they need when we run out of supplies we head back to Chattonooga to see what is happening now. We are informed that the war is over and the Union won! Which means our side won!
Tuesday, April 27, 2010
Monday, April 12, 2010
Vacation
Lets see, it all started on Wednesday the second last day of school before spring break. It is 12:25 and I am getting ready to leave from school, it finally comes 12:30 I get out of school and I see my mom parked right by the school with my sister inside, SPRING BREAK STARTS! how excilirating! when we got home I finished my lunch and started finishing packing, then it comes to 4 o'clock, everyone gets into the car and we drive to my Uncle Brad's/Grandma's house. When we pick him up, we are headed to Mitchell International Airport,soon we are headed to Florida on a Monday we head for the beach around 6:15 and wait to see the space shuttle discovery lift off! it is now 6:21 and I see a burst of light in the sky and there comes the shuttle! it flys by so fast that it turns into a comet and soon breaks the earth's atmosphere and soon we here a BOOM, and then we wait for the sunrise and take pictures, on Thursday we head for Ocala to visit Grandma and Grandpa but first we head to Kennedy Space Centre gift shop after that we head for Ocala and meet Grandma and Grandpa at Red Lobster after that we head to the house and see what's new there. The next day my Dad, Grandpa, Uncle Scott, and cousin Mike go play 18 the next day I get to play nine holes of golf! then after that we head home, on Sunday we go to the Brewers game and they won 8-7 in the bottom of the ninth a walk-off! and then on Monday I head for school and spring break ends.
Thursday, March 25, 2010
The Evil Man at Grady Manor
One Day a man feels like he needs a vacation, so he then gets to a plane flies to his destination and then he goes to Grady Manor. The bad thing is he doesn’t know what he is getting into. He rings for the bell and the door suddenly opens and then suddenly the room goes dark, he comes in and sees if anyone is home. Now one answered, suddenly he sees a flickering light upstairs floating and then it disappears in a door. He goes to investigate the room and when he opens the door there was no one there. It has been a long day so then he goes to a room and doses off.
A crash, like that of a window breaking, woke me with him with a start. He rushes outside to see what happened and he sees a mysterious man looking straight at him. He doesn’t know what to do so he just froze. The mysterious man keeps looking at him and then suddenly disappears in mid air. “Well that was odd” he said to himself. And then he feels a breeze behind him and turns around and the man is right in the room where he slept. Then he goes talk to the man,
Man “What are you doing here you scared me”!
Mysterious man “I’m the ghost of Grady Manor I come out when people arrive and haunt them until they leave. I don’t want anyone in my house!”
The Man was startled, he didn’t know what to do, the only thing he could do was to go to a town person and see what is going on.
Man “Do you know there is a ghost in Grady Manor?”
Town person “Grady Manor? That old manor has been down for centuries I cant believe you got in!
The man rushes to the Manor and sees that the Manor is gone!
A crash, like that of a window breaking, woke me with him with a start. He rushes outside to see what happened and he sees a mysterious man looking straight at him. He doesn’t know what to do so he just froze. The mysterious man keeps looking at him and then suddenly disappears in mid air. “Well that was odd” he said to himself. And then he feels a breeze behind him and turns around and the man is right in the room where he slept. Then he goes talk to the man,
Man “What are you doing here you scared me”!
Mysterious man “I’m the ghost of Grady Manor I come out when people arrive and haunt them until they leave. I don’t want anyone in my house!”
The Man was startled, he didn’t know what to do, the only thing he could do was to go to a town person and see what is going on.
Man “Do you know there is a ghost in Grady Manor?”
Town person “Grady Manor? That old manor has been down for centuries I cant believe you got in!
The man rushes to the Manor and sees that the Manor is gone!
Monday, March 8, 2010
The Third Wish
Imagine minding your own buisness and suddenly you hear a life-like wailing nose what do you do? This is what Mr.Peters feels like in the story "The Third Wish." There is a swan that Mr.Peters untangles but then the swan turns into a tiny leprecaun how could that happen? Mr.Peters lives in an ironic world when Leita comes in his life.
Mr.Peters is a man who cares about solving others problems than himself. He had to suffer the consequnces after losing Leita. Also, he never used his last wish. Eventually, Mr.Peters proved that he had to suffer the consequences on page 174 when he said “Two wishes are enough for me. I’ve learned that even if your wishes are granted they don’t always help you”.
The mode of Literature is an Irony because the main character is not in control. The world is unrealistic because the swan turned into a man and that cannot happen in real life situation. The world is a nightmare because Leita has a sister but her sister is a swan and she is a human and she says its hard to be a human in my perspective, it is not hard to be a human. The main character is not in control because his wishes get out of hand and he cannot stop the events that are happening. At the end of the story Mr.Peters dies.
Leita is a swan, but then Mr.Peters turns her into a human which is hard for her because she is used to being a swan. Then there is a conflict that kicks in, Leita has a sister, who is a swan. Then Mr.Peters finds her next to a riverbank crying and holding a goose in her arms. He realizes that Leita was a swan and then Mr.Peters is forced to change her back and then he is lonely once again. At the end of the story Mr.Peters dies on his bed with a smile on his face.
In this ironic story Mr.Peters and Leita both learned that wishes dont help you. Be careful of what you wish for because there are consequences in some wishes that people cannot fix and that wish will haunt them forever.
Mr.Peters is a man who cares about solving others problems than himself. He had to suffer the consequnces after losing Leita. Also, he never used his last wish. Eventually, Mr.Peters proved that he had to suffer the consequences on page 174 when he said “Two wishes are enough for me. I’ve learned that even if your wishes are granted they don’t always help you”.
The mode of Literature is an Irony because the main character is not in control. The world is unrealistic because the swan turned into a man and that cannot happen in real life situation. The world is a nightmare because Leita has a sister but her sister is a swan and she is a human and she says its hard to be a human in my perspective, it is not hard to be a human. The main character is not in control because his wishes get out of hand and he cannot stop the events that are happening. At the end of the story Mr.Peters dies.
Leita is a swan, but then Mr.Peters turns her into a human which is hard for her because she is used to being a swan. Then there is a conflict that kicks in, Leita has a sister, who is a swan. Then Mr.Peters finds her next to a riverbank crying and holding a goose in her arms. He realizes that Leita was a swan and then Mr.Peters is forced to change her back and then he is lonely once again. At the end of the story Mr.Peters dies on his bed with a smile on his face.
In this ironic story Mr.Peters and Leita both learned that wishes dont help you. Be careful of what you wish for because there are consequences in some wishes that people cannot fix and that wish will haunt them forever.
Monday, February 22, 2010
Life versus Death
One day a cab driver named Bob drives up to a man, the man didn’t seem to fit in the century, but Bob picked him up anyway because he needed the buisness.
Bob: Hello, sir where do you want me to take you?
Death: Nowhere, you are going to die before this ride is over.
Bob: What the heck are you talking about? Who the heck are you?
Death: You are going to hit a lady and you are going to have a concussion and die, I am Death the leader of lost souls.
Bob: Uhhhhh, Ok weird, im not going to start the car then.
Death: Yes you are, you are supposed to die I didn’t come to see you live.
Bob: Well sorry, im not going to die today, im to depressed.
Death: That’s great! Depressed is good! NOW START THE CAR!
Bob: No! im going to get out of the car now
(Death locks all the doors and windows with his powers.)
Bob: Why did you just do that?
Death: I told you, you are going to die.
(Death starts the car)
(Bob takes the key out)
Bob: What the heck is your problem?
Death: YOU ARE GOING TO DIE! NOW DIE!
(Bob smashes the door open)
(Bob runs away from death)
Death: You have been warned, now I am going to kill you! MUAHAHAHAHA!
(Bob rushes to his house)
(Bob locks everything)
(Death goes to his house)
Death: Death kills the man and takes him undergound and lost forever, but what you may not know is that death is the one who is killed one big twist of events right?
Bob: Hello, sir where do you want me to take you?
Death: Nowhere, you are going to die before this ride is over.
Bob: What the heck are you talking about? Who the heck are you?
Death: You are going to hit a lady and you are going to have a concussion and die, I am Death the leader of lost souls.
Bob: Uhhhhh, Ok weird, im not going to start the car then.
Death: Yes you are, you are supposed to die I didn’t come to see you live.
Bob: Well sorry, im not going to die today, im to depressed.
Death: That’s great! Depressed is good! NOW START THE CAR!
Bob: No! im going to get out of the car now
(Death locks all the doors and windows with his powers.)
Bob: Why did you just do that?
Death: I told you, you are going to die.
(Death starts the car)
(Bob takes the key out)
Bob: What the heck is your problem?
Death: YOU ARE GOING TO DIE! NOW DIE!
(Bob smashes the door open)
(Bob runs away from death)
Death: You have been warned, now I am going to kill you! MUAHAHAHAHA!
(Bob rushes to his house)
(Bob locks everything)
(Death goes to his house)
Death: Death kills the man and takes him undergound and lost forever, but what you may not know is that death is the one who is killed one big twist of events right?
Tuesday, February 16, 2010
Godfather Death by Jakob and Wilhelm Grimn
Most people have Godfathers but this child’s dad picked Death to be the godfather because the man had no choice. The dad was really poor and Death takes the rich and the poor. The short story Godfather Death Jakob and Wilhelm Grimn tells a unrealistic negative tale.
The mode of literature is an Irony because the story is unrealistic. The kid is not in control because Death takes control over the kid. The world is in chaos because death comes into the world and that cannot happen. The Godfather has power of life and death, The doctor gives the king a herb to let him live. Death was furious but he gave the doctor another chance.
The short story Godfather Death Jakob and Wilhelm Grimn tell a unrealistic tail. The story was unrealistic because the main character was never in control
The mode of literature is an Irony because the story is unrealistic. The kid is not in control because Death takes control over the kid. The world is in chaos because death comes into the world and that cannot happen. The Godfather has power of life and death, The doctor gives the king a herb to let him live. Death was furious but he gave the doctor another chance.
The short story Godfather Death Jakob and Wilhelm Grimn tell a unrealistic tail. The story was unrealistic because the main character was never in control
Monday, February 8, 2010
Day Of The Butterfly by Alice Munro
Imagine living in the town for your whole kid life and you have to take care of your little brother. You cannot play with your friends because your little brother is scared because kids are waiting for him to corner him. This is how the children feel in the story "Day Of The Butterfly".
In the 1960’s in the United States children in the south had to go to certain schools because of their color. In this story boys and girls are seperated by gender. The girls were mean to each other and they didn’t even include Myra the main character. They were nasty to Myra because the girls didn’t like Myra and they were mocking her because of the time period. In the 1960’s it is the same situation but then they were separated by color than gender.
A symbol from the story is the butterfly because it symbolizes friendship. The butterfly came from her friend in a box of Cracker Jack. Helen is being friendly because she doesn’t want Myra get caught in the same situation as the narrator. And Helen doesn’t get caught in the same situation as Myra after all.
In conclusion Myra doesn’t get in the same situation so Myra’s life wont be as bad as Helen’s. I learned that you shouldn't be criticized because of your color or your gender.
In the 1960’s in the United States children in the south had to go to certain schools because of their color. In this story boys and girls are seperated by gender. The girls were mean to each other and they didn’t even include Myra the main character. They were nasty to Myra because the girls didn’t like Myra and they were mocking her because of the time period. In the 1960’s it is the same situation but then they were separated by color than gender.
A symbol from the story is the butterfly because it symbolizes friendship. The butterfly came from her friend in a box of Cracker Jack. Helen is being friendly because she doesn’t want Myra get caught in the same situation as the narrator. And Helen doesn’t get caught in the same situation as Myra after all.
In conclusion Myra doesn’t get in the same situation so Myra’s life wont be as bad as Helen’s. I learned that you shouldn't be criticized because of your color or your gender.
Thursday, February 4, 2010
Creative piece leprechauns versus giants
One day the leprechaun king (Joe O’Reilly) and the giant king (Gerry Humongesour) are trying to negotiate on land.
Joe O’Reily: I will give you 3/4 of our grass land so you can harvest your big food for 5/4 of your coal mine so we can have some profit to expand our kingdom.
Gerry Humongesour: Well, that doesn’t seem fair, how about I give you 1/4 half of our coal mine for 1/5 of your grass land.
Joe O’Reily: That’s it! I gave you all of my options and there is only one more option I will give you: War!
Gerry Humongesour: Fine! Bring it on little tiny leprechaun!
Now the Giants and the Leprechauns are getting ready for war.
Leprechaun scientist: Ok, with all of our work shown this explosive magic bomb will transport victim giants into leprechauns so we can use them to make more weapons or whatever we need done.
Joe O’ Reily: do you have any proof that it will work?
Leprechaun scientist: Yes we do, we managed to capture a giant and use the explosive bomb on him.
Leprechaun scientist chief: put in the coordinates for firing the explosive bomb! Ready everyone?
Leprechaun staff: yes sir!
Leprechaun scientist chief: ready, aim, fire!
Explosive potion is launched at the giant
Victim giant: GRAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! NO PLEASE STOP! GRRRRRAAAAAAAAAHHH!
Victim giant turns into leprechaun.
Joe O’Reily: make as many explosive bombs that you can before the war starts.
Leprechaun staff: Yes sir!
Joe O’Reily exits and goes to geographic leprechaun whiz.
Geographic leprechaun whiz: Hi sir, take a seat.
Joe O’ Reily: what is our perimeter for our battlefield?
Geographic leprechaun whiz: If my calculations are correct, do you see that second tree? Ok, well our biggest force can take over that section and take the giants by surprise we can make our troops make a base at that location.
Joe O’Reily: That is crucial; do you know how many giants there are at that point?
Geographic leprechaun whiz: I am estimation about 20 giants but they are powerful.
Joe O’Reily: please excuse me I need to go talk to the weapon station.
Meanwhile the giants are having a conference at their base.
Gerry Humongesour: How much territory do we have?
Giant geographic whiz: Well depending on how many leprechauns they have we have about 10/6 of the land and now the—
Gerry Humongesour cuts off
Gerry Humongesour: I don’t have time for this; I need to go to the weapon station.
Giant engineer: we have all the weapons we need let me show you our biggest one.
Giant engineer gets out the machine gun 5200 it takes three giants to carry to the platform.
Gerry Humongesour: HOLY COW! That is huge it’s even taller than me and I’m the tallest giant in the kingdom.
Meanwhile back at the leprechaun weapon station.
Joe O’ Reily: so what weapons have the most power?
(Suddenly the base shakes)
Joe O Reily: What the heck was that?
Joe O’Reily’s cell phone rings
Base leader: Sir, the Giants just attacked us we need orders!
Joe O’Reily: I wasn’t ready yet but ok, get the guns out and square off the base with the troopers and get the huge machines out and head for their base.
Base Leader: Yes sir!
Base leader goes on intercom
Base leader: all troopers go to weapon station stat! Grab guns and square off the base! Also, troopers grab the giant machines and head for the giants base.
Giants base leader see’s leprechaun’s massive machines and panics
Joe O’Reily: get the 5200 gun out and start shooting the leprechauns!
Base leader: Ready! Set, Fire!
(5200 gun shoots leprechauns)
Joe O’Reily: red alert! Red alert! Troops guard all entrances; I repeat troops guard all entrances including windows.
Base leader: we need more troops; troop commander recruit more troops stat!
Troop commander: yes sir!
Troop commander: all troops report to the meeting room stat, I repeat meet in the meeting room stat!
Joe O Reilly: this war is getting out of hand (puts his finger on a button which protects the meeting room from any harm.
Meanwhile back at the giants’ base
Gerry Humongesour: base leader, starts shooting at the protective shield keep shooting until all off the shield is gone!
Meanwhile back at Leprechaun base
BOOM! The base shakes
Joe O’Reilly’s phone rings
Base Commander: sir the giants are shooting at the protective shield!
Joe O’Reily: ok get the rest of the trrops and start shooting the leprechauns
Base commander: Yes sir!
Base commander: rest of troopers go outside and kill the leprecauns!
Meanwhile back at the Giants base
Gerry Humongesour: this war is getting out of hand, im going to go to their base a settle a truce come with my with some troops grab my gun.
Gerry Humongesour: everyone have their weapon handy? Ok! Move in troops check if Th coast is clear.
Troopers: yes sir! all clear!
Gerry Humongesour goes by Joe O reilly
Gerry Humongesour: This war is getting out of hand too many people are dying.
Joe O’ Reilly: agreed
Gerry Humongesour: I will give you 9/4 of anything you want for 9/4 of anything I want in land.
Joe O Reilly: agreed now lets call of the war in case more people die.
Gerry Humongesour: giants return back to base! The war is over back to the base stat!
Giants: yes sir!
Joe O Reilly: all leprechauns go back to base the war is over!
Leprechaun troops: yes sir!
Now the war is over and the giants and the leprechauns go back to their normal lives and no more wars are going to happen. Or are going to be…….?
Joe O’Reily: I will give you 3/4 of our grass land so you can harvest your big food for 5/4 of your coal mine so we can have some profit to expand our kingdom.
Gerry Humongesour: Well, that doesn’t seem fair, how about I give you 1/4 half of our coal mine for 1/5 of your grass land.
Joe O’Reily: That’s it! I gave you all of my options and there is only one more option I will give you: War!
Gerry Humongesour: Fine! Bring it on little tiny leprechaun!
Now the Giants and the Leprechauns are getting ready for war.
Leprechaun scientist: Ok, with all of our work shown this explosive magic bomb will transport victim giants into leprechauns so we can use them to make more weapons or whatever we need done.
Joe O’ Reily: do you have any proof that it will work?
Leprechaun scientist: Yes we do, we managed to capture a giant and use the explosive bomb on him.
Leprechaun scientist chief: put in the coordinates for firing the explosive bomb! Ready everyone?
Leprechaun staff: yes sir!
Leprechaun scientist chief: ready, aim, fire!
Explosive potion is launched at the giant
Victim giant: GRAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH! NO PLEASE STOP! GRRRRRAAAAAAAAAHHH!
Victim giant turns into leprechaun.
Joe O’Reily: make as many explosive bombs that you can before the war starts.
Leprechaun staff: Yes sir!
Joe O’Reily exits and goes to geographic leprechaun whiz.
Geographic leprechaun whiz: Hi sir, take a seat.
Joe O’ Reily: what is our perimeter for our battlefield?
Geographic leprechaun whiz: If my calculations are correct, do you see that second tree? Ok, well our biggest force can take over that section and take the giants by surprise we can make our troops make a base at that location.
Joe O’Reily: That is crucial; do you know how many giants there are at that point?
Geographic leprechaun whiz: I am estimation about 20 giants but they are powerful.
Joe O’Reily: please excuse me I need to go talk to the weapon station.
Meanwhile the giants are having a conference at their base.
Gerry Humongesour: How much territory do we have?
Giant geographic whiz: Well depending on how many leprechauns they have we have about 10/6 of the land and now the—
Gerry Humongesour cuts off
Gerry Humongesour: I don’t have time for this; I need to go to the weapon station.
Giant engineer: we have all the weapons we need let me show you our biggest one.
Giant engineer gets out the machine gun 5200 it takes three giants to carry to the platform.
Gerry Humongesour: HOLY COW! That is huge it’s even taller than me and I’m the tallest giant in the kingdom.
Meanwhile back at the leprechaun weapon station.
Joe O’ Reily: so what weapons have the most power?
(Suddenly the base shakes)
Joe O Reily: What the heck was that?
Joe O’Reily’s cell phone rings
Base leader: Sir, the Giants just attacked us we need orders!
Joe O’Reily: I wasn’t ready yet but ok, get the guns out and square off the base with the troopers and get the huge machines out and head for their base.
Base Leader: Yes sir!
Base leader goes on intercom
Base leader: all troopers go to weapon station stat! Grab guns and square off the base! Also, troopers grab the giant machines and head for the giants base.
Giants base leader see’s leprechaun’s massive machines and panics
Joe O’Reily: get the 5200 gun out and start shooting the leprechauns!
Base leader: Ready! Set, Fire!
(5200 gun shoots leprechauns)
Joe O’Reily: red alert! Red alert! Troops guard all entrances; I repeat troops guard all entrances including windows.
Base leader: we need more troops; troop commander recruit more troops stat!
Troop commander: yes sir!
Troop commander: all troops report to the meeting room stat, I repeat meet in the meeting room stat!
Joe O Reilly: this war is getting out of hand (puts his finger on a button which protects the meeting room from any harm.
Meanwhile back at the giants’ base
Gerry Humongesour: base leader, starts shooting at the protective shield keep shooting until all off the shield is gone!
Meanwhile back at Leprechaun base
BOOM! The base shakes
Joe O’Reilly’s phone rings
Base Commander: sir the giants are shooting at the protective shield!
Joe O’Reily: ok get the rest of the trrops and start shooting the leprechauns
Base commander: Yes sir!
Base commander: rest of troopers go outside and kill the leprecauns!
Meanwhile back at the Giants base
Gerry Humongesour: this war is getting out of hand, im going to go to their base a settle a truce come with my with some troops grab my gun.
Gerry Humongesour: everyone have their weapon handy? Ok! Move in troops check if Th coast is clear.
Troopers: yes sir! all clear!
Gerry Humongesour goes by Joe O reilly
Gerry Humongesour: This war is getting out of hand too many people are dying.
Joe O’ Reilly: agreed
Gerry Humongesour: I will give you 9/4 of anything you want for 9/4 of anything I want in land.
Joe O Reilly: agreed now lets call of the war in case more people die.
Gerry Humongesour: giants return back to base! The war is over back to the base stat!
Giants: yes sir!
Joe O Reilly: all leprechauns go back to base the war is over!
Leprechaun troops: yes sir!
Now the war is over and the giants and the leprechauns go back to their normal lives and no more wars are going to happen. Or are going to be…….?
Monday, January 25, 2010
Tell Tale Heart paper
Have you ever known what it feels like to be living with a mad man? Well, I will tell you why there is a mad man in the story. The story Tall Tell Heart is an Irony because the story is Unrealistic.
The story is unrealistic because the mad man can hear voices from heaven and from hell. Also, the mad man cuts up the old mans body to pieces and buries him under the floor. He hears the old man’s heart beating when the cops come into the room and he plays the good guy until the mad man goes crazy and confesses his murder. The reason the mad man kills the old man is because the mad man couldn’t stand the old man’s eye. He called the eye “The Evil Eye” and he couldn’t stand the sight of it. Also, the mad man kills the old man brutally.
In conclusion the main character is a mad man because he can hear things that no one else can hear. I didn’t like the story because the main character did creepy things like cutting up the old man’s body etc
The story is unrealistic because the mad man can hear voices from heaven and from hell. Also, the mad man cuts up the old mans body to pieces and buries him under the floor. He hears the old man’s heart beating when the cops come into the room and he plays the good guy until the mad man goes crazy and confesses his murder. The reason the mad man kills the old man is because the mad man couldn’t stand the old man’s eye. He called the eye “The Evil Eye” and he couldn’t stand the sight of it. Also, the mad man kills the old man brutally.
In conclusion the main character is a mad man because he can hear things that no one else can hear. I didn’t like the story because the main character did creepy things like cutting up the old man’s body etc
Thursday, January 21, 2010
Goals for Writing
Creative writing goals: Dont end with a question, have more than three paragraphs. writing goals: have more than three paragraphs and dont end in a question
Subscribe to:
Comments (Atom)

