One Day a man feels like he needs a vacation, so he then gets to a plane flies to his destination and then he goes to Grady Manor. The bad thing is he doesn’t know what he is getting into. He rings for the bell and the door suddenly opens and then suddenly the room goes dark, he comes in and sees if anyone is home. Now one answered, suddenly he sees a flickering light upstairs floating and then it disappears in a door. He goes to investigate the room and when he opens the door there was no one there. It has been a long day so then he goes to a room and doses off.
A crash, like that of a window breaking, woke me with him with a start. He rushes outside to see what happened and he sees a mysterious man looking straight at him. He doesn’t know what to do so he just froze. The mysterious man keeps looking at him and then suddenly disappears in mid air. “Well that was odd” he said to himself. And then he feels a breeze behind him and turns around and the man is right in the room where he slept. Then he goes talk to the man,
Man “What are you doing here you scared me”!
Mysterious man “I’m the ghost of Grady Manor I come out when people arrive and haunt them until they leave. I don’t want anyone in my house!”
The Man was startled, he didn’t know what to do, the only thing he could do was to go to a town person and see what is going on.
Man “Do you know there is a ghost in Grady Manor?”
Town person “Grady Manor? That old manor has been down for centuries I cant believe you got in!
The man rushes to the Manor and sees that the Manor is gone!
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This is very well done! It's suspenseful with many perfect details. Your twist ending was excellent!
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