Monday, February 22, 2010

Life versus Death

One day a cab driver named Bob drives up to a man, the man didn’t seem to fit in the century, but Bob picked him up anyway because he needed the buisness.
Bob: Hello, sir where do you want me to take you?
Death: Nowhere, you are going to die before this ride is over.
Bob: What the heck are you talking about? Who the heck are you?
Death: You are going to hit a lady and you are going to have a concussion and die, I am Death the leader of lost souls.
Bob: Uhhhhh, Ok weird, im not going to start the car then.
Death: Yes you are, you are supposed to die I didn’t come to see you live.
Bob: Well sorry, im not going to die today, im to depressed.
Death: That’s great! Depressed is good! NOW START THE CAR!
Bob: No! im going to get out of the car now
(Death locks all the doors and windows with his powers.)
Bob: Why did you just do that?
Death: I told you, you are going to die.
(Death starts the car)
(Bob takes the key out)
Bob: What the heck is your problem?
Death: YOU ARE GOING TO DIE! NOW DIE!
(Bob smashes the door open)
(Bob runs away from death)
Death: You have been warned, now I am going to kill you! MUAHAHAHAHA!
(Bob rushes to his house)
(Bob locks everything)
(Death goes to his house)
Death: Death kills the man and takes him undergound and lost forever, but what you may not know is that death is the one who is killed one big twist of events right?

2 comments:

  1. Very original to set this up as a play. I enjoyed reading the stage directions in parentheses. My suggestion: what about the ending? It feels rushed. Is there any way you'd like to revise it?

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